分享视频ielts考小作文怎么写考试真题的范本。每段篇范本都依靠职业 开发团队总是校对，以后外教查核终稿。实现目标是日复一天哪位一点小小的全力以赴的1个。图片大全【打头段】1. Shown in the graph are the number of shops closed and that of shops opened in one country, and the period of 2011 to 2018 is studied. 2. Overall, there was a disparity chiefly in two aspects between the two numbers. 【客体部门】划分成3段First, they differed markedly at the beginning of the time, 6,500 and 8,500 respectively, and so in the end, with slightly over 5,000 and 3000 in 2018. Second, the two numbers varied throughout the time in their own ways. 这1段总述。随后说“关张”。In terms of the shops closed, all other times witnessed either moderate fluctuations or stability, except the three-year period of 2014 to 2016. During the three years, a plunge – from 6,500 to the all-time low of roughly 700 – occurred first, and then there was a surge back to a high level – 5,000. 你要挖掘：老章的写法不是以左到右通过时光近况写。那写又笨又僵硬，自然不评分。老章的写法是，浅写细水长流的农历年，认准写唯一性的农历年，因此这是图的【main features】。接下来说“在开张”。In terms of the number of shops opened, the initial few years are most notable, as it plummeted from 8,500 to 4000 and then sprang back to a high point of 6,000. However, during the subsequent years, the number fell to 4,000 again, stayed and slid further to 3,000. 你是表明：老章在此段的写法是转换。既然从左到右按部就班多段日子，如果按照“the initial few years are most notable”来更具老章在写图的【main features】。或者，就是写法正规，老章还得能够 按照【措辞】和【状语从句】来拿分。補充：线图的日子轴，会出现了五种。明确发现的也许 性排名：1）完完全全在以往：大部分从前（在从前引发过）；以往通过（在以往连续發生）；过来已完成（比普遍过来更早的过来+特别强调长期积累性可是）。2）过来到当前：通常过往的（在过往的发生了过）；过去式式通过（过去的式式定期会发生）；往日完全（比通常往日更早的往日 + 体现了囤积性但是）；当今搞定（推崇加权平均值性报告单）。3）过往到过去：通常情况下去（在去产生过）；在曾经开始（在在曾经不间断会出现）；过来到位（比大部分过来更早的过来 + 注重累加性结杲）；现代完工（特别指出长期积累性后果）；平常未来职业时（关注有机会性的粗细）。
老章有对应范文，在合辑里找到。